Hi Danielle - for me 'tree hugger' is very 'now' idea and not a very 30s idea - it's an anachronism and it feels a bit odd if I'm being honest. I know you need a punchline for this first skit, but I don't know if this should be it. Maybe you could just have the fairy returning with a great big paddle or some similar weapon and we see her standing behind the catcher and draw it back (because she's going to spank the catcher's arse) and as she does, she looks out at the camera, looks mischievous and then we see her pull her arms back and swing it forwards - and then we cut to black just before we see the impact, but we hear the 'Owwwww!' on the soundtrack and the lovely slapping sound?
Hi Danielle - for me 'tree hugger' is very 'now' idea and not a very 30s idea - it's an anachronism and it feels a bit odd if I'm being honest. I know you need a punchline for this first skit, but I don't know if this should be it. Maybe you could just have the fairy returning with a great big paddle or some similar weapon and we see her standing behind the catcher and draw it back (because she's going to spank the catcher's arse) and as she does, she looks out at the camera, looks mischievous and then we see her pull her arms back and swing it forwards - and then we cut to black just before we see the impact, but we hear the 'Owwwww!' on the soundtrack and the lovely slapping sound?
ReplyDeleteAh thank you Phil that does sound like a much better idea :)
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