Friday, 16 February 2018
Major: Animatic Update
On the day of the minor hand-in I was happy with the animatic, however looking at it again I am happy with the 2nd and 3rd parts of my animatic but am not entirely happy with the first skit. As the skits that involve the tree are the most successful, I feel that the first skit set around a stone circle does not tie in and feels like a continuity error. I have tried the animatic once again being solely set around the tree.
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Hi Danielle. Can you post your movies bigger?
ReplyDeleteHi Alan, Will do!
DeleteThats better :)
DeleteI like the new addition although I think it needs something at the end, a tiny bit more of a pay-off to the setup. It could be really simple but it seems to me that the fairy had a goal in mind in trying to get the catcher into that position...or at the very least wouldn't just leave without having the last laugh. In Tom and Jerry, Tom would get hit on the backside with a wooden plank. In your case it may not be that extreme but that kind of ending does illustrate the need for a conclusion. Also, the other two skits have an anarchic ending and this one doesn't. As I said, it doesn't need to be complicated.
ReplyDeleteAlso - It seems odd that he's see's the fairy and then puts his head in?
ReplyDeleteJust wanted to say that basing it all around the tree makes complete sense and really focuses everything - good job!
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